We have shown are trailer drafts to the class which we were given some feedback from, here is what they said;
- cut the clips between the inter titles so that the titles appear closer together
-at 1.33 on the inter title change un-capitals to capitals for continuity
On top of this we also received feedback from a man who specialising in trailers, this is the feedback we received;
-we had good pace with cuts etc.
-1.37 maybe darken the shot
- or use violent camera shake and intense sound design to imply struggle/violence/fear - just after head turn to girl maybe use scream or disturbing sound
-ending should be more intense
- titles are good at end
-"he's here" make a little louder, its a nice whisper but needs to stand out a little more
Overall we was pleased with the feedback that we got as there was not many adjustments we had to make which told us we had a successful trailer.
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